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Heartache -Writing Prompt 6- by *Faoiltiarna-Wolf:iconFaoiltiarna-Wolf:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Other Romance > Open


You gave me soft words,
gentle touches and tender kisses.
Then turned around
and caused me pain.
I fell for you,
my own fault.
I was warned,
you couldn't be true.
I asked for honesty,
you gave me lies.
I asked for love,
you gave me a facade.
Everything I gave to you was true,
and in return you gave me fallacies.
You played me,
I was your fool.
The chase, the wooing,
were naught but a game to you.
And that game was
worth more to you
than the prize.
I can only hope one day,
maybe soon,  
you will feel
what you gave to me.
Heartache.
©2009 *Faoiltiarna-Wolf
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~tinz2008 Nov 6, 2009, 1:41:08 AM
it's so wonderful!

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tinz
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*Faoiltiarna-Wolf Nov 6, 2009, 6:29:43 AM
Thank you!

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If it's worth having, it won't come easy...
Unfortunately, most people these days don't know how to fight for what they want, and throw away priceless treasures by walking away like cowards.
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~KH-fan4life Nov 6, 2009, 7:44:27 AM
This is really good, love it :heart:
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*lordbeazy Nov 6, 2009, 8:13:51 AM
Love's sting in a slightly angry poem! :)

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The most successful serial killer of all time, is time itself.
Just thought I’d depress you. :D
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*Faoiltiarna-Wolf Nov 6, 2009, 9:40:56 AM
:huggle: Thanks hun. Still working on the challenge, so should have some more up tonight I hope!

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If it's worth having, it won't come easy...
Unfortunately, most people these days don't know how to fight for what they want, and throw away priceless treasures by walking away like cowards.
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*Faoiltiarna-Wolf Nov 6, 2009, 9:43:53 AM
Thank you so much hun!

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If it's worth having, it won't come easy...
Unfortunately, most people these days don't know how to fight for what they want, and throw away priceless treasures by walking away like cowards.
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*lordbeazy Nov 6, 2009, 10:36:48 AM
Okays :)

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The most successful serial killer of all time, is time itself.
Just thought I’d depress you. :D
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=connorish Nov 7, 2009, 4:31:23 PM
I guess that's exactly what everyone wants to say when he/she has got a heartache. Its beautifully written, and oh so true. Well done sweety

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I write e r o t i c a.
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