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You see only the light in my eyes,
you cannot see what's behind them.
Funny how they say
eyes are the windows to the soul.
Guess I have better shutters.
I cannot let you,
will not let you,
see what lays behind my eyes.
The darkness within is mine,
and mine alone to bear.
You cannot shine your
little light in there,
cannot brighten what
I keep locked away.
Inside is truly a frightening place,
a veritable kingdom of
creatures, monsters,
all manner of fears.
All are me, and none are.
The shades within are all that
protect you, guard you,
from me.
You could not handle what
I hold within me,
it would consume you,
eat you whole and spit you out again.
Leaving you hollow and empty.
So it's best not to pick through my mind.
Leave the gates alone,
lest you let the darkness of my soul
out to play, out to feed.
:iconfaoiltiarna-wolf:

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This is my entry for the contest held by :iconwargusestor:
The Darkness in my Soul. Info here: [link]

Deadline's coming up, so enter quickly if you're going to!

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:icondreamsd:
Very nice, good luck with the contest!

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Before and after...
:iconfaoiltiarna-wolf:
Thank you hun!

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If it's worth having, it won't come easy...
Unfortunately, most people these days don't know how to fight for what they want, and throw away priceless treasures by walking away like cowards.
:iconsalemcat:
WOW!I really love this! Would it surprise you to know that I can relate so completely to this..I can't wait to read more!

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I want to die in my sleep like my Grandfather...not screaming and yelling like the passengers in his car.
:icondameodessa:
Good luck, I love the feeling in this one! ;)

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"Toutes les âmes n'ont pas une égale aptitude au bonheur comme toutes les terres ne portent pas également des moissons"

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:iconlordbeazy:
A shivery piece that lurks in dark corners. Nice subject and atmosphere. :)

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The most successful serial killer of all time, is time itself.
Just thought I’d depress you. :D
:iconfaoiltiarna-wolf:
Thank you hun!

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If it's worth having, it won't come easy...
Unfortunately, most people these days don't know how to fight for what they want, and throw away priceless treasures by walking away like cowards.
:iconfaoiltiarna-wolf:
Thank you so much!

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If it's worth having, it won't come easy...
Unfortunately, most people these days don't know how to fight for what they want, and throw away priceless treasures by walking away like cowards.
:iconfaoiltiarna-wolf:
I'm happy you can, it's always nice to know when your writing can touch someone.. Then you know you're doing it right.

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If it's worth having, it won't come easy...
Unfortunately, most people these days don't know how to fight for what they want, and throw away priceless treasures by walking away like cowards.
:iconconnorish:
Very nice poem really :)

Also posted my entry for this contest haha I am sucking in contrast to u lol

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