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Just want to close my eyes,
want to sleep forever.
Let me escape this pain,
and all the misery surrounding me.
Let all the doubt and
self recriminations melt,
like the ice in late Spring.
I want to let the dark
embrace me,
envelop me,
let it hold me like a lover,
close to the heart.
Either swallow me up,
or avenge me.
Protect me from the outside,
protect me from myself.
Take me away from here,
somewhere far away,
where I can be free,
or let me sleep forever.
:iconfaoiltiarna-wolf:

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:iconmorphine-cloud:
Great great.... it's just how I feel....

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:blackrose: I gaze upon the mystery, this lovelorn identity...
Frozen beyond the echoes of laughter
:blackrose:

Draconian
:iconemeraldragonfly:
amazing as always. :#1:
:hug:

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~Lusus Naturae~
~>O<
~ eM~
:iconemeraldragonfly:
amazing as always. :#1:
:hug:

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~Lusus Naturae~
~>O<
~ eM~
:iconbigmoody1:
Sigh...all too true...

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Nothing matters, and what if it did?
:iconsparkeyboy09:
This is EXACTLY how i feel at this time Tia,it's uncanny how your poems sometime mirror my own soul.

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"Lock the gates Goofy take my hand and lead me through the world of self"
Splendid Isolation
Warren Zevon
:iconudxprodx:
WOW!
So wonderful, this is a true master's writing. Thats why i love your work its so deep and powerful.

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:jsenn:
Dream Digital Ximphonic Fantasy
Dreaming Symphonic-Beauty Beyond Imagination, Beyond Fantasy
:iconfireopal14:
Wonderfully written Tia......and heartfelt as always :tighthug:


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:love:
True friends stay when everyone else leaves.
Awesome Avatar by ^CookiemagiK
:iconfaoiltiarna-wolf:
:huggle: Thank you!

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If it's worth having, it won't come easy...
Unfortunately, most people these days don't know how to fight for what they want, and throw away priceless treasures by walking away like cowards.
:iconfaoiltiarna-wolf:
:blush: I don't mean to tell secrets!! :huggle:

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If it's worth having, it won't come easy...
Unfortunately, most people these days don't know how to fight for what they want, and throw away priceless treasures by walking away like cowards.
:iconfaoiltiarna-wolf:
:blush: Thank you so much for the support and kind words, they do mean a lot to me!

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If it's worth having, it won't come easy...
Unfortunately, most people these days don't know how to fight for what they want, and throw away priceless treasures by walking away like cowards.

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